Thursday 13 February 2014

Historica Lesson - How to write a paragraph.

For Historica we have a graphic organizer.  We used it to make our topic easier to sort out.  We put the main topic in the middle, and we wrote out 4 sub-topics.  With each sub-topic we put, in point form, a few important details.  

Today we talked about how to turn our point form details into a paragraph.  A paragraph has an introduction sentence.  It has some detail sentences, and a conclusion sentence.  A good conclusion sentence can say what we think or feel (about the topic).

We learned about Tim Horton and made a paragraph as a class.

Tim Horton's hockey career
  • started at 5 years old
  • played on 4 teams, TML, Pens, Sabers, NYR
  • He played defence
  • he won 4 stanley cups
  • Gordie Howe called him hockey's strongest man.
  • was an all star 6 times.

Paragraph about Tim Horton's hockey Career

     Tim Horton's hockey career began at age 5.  He played on four different NHL teams, the Leafs, the Penguins, the Sabers, and the Rangers.  He was a defenceman.  He was on a cup winning team four times.  Tim Horton was selected to be an all star six times.  Gordie Howe called him the strongest man in the NHL.  He had a long and successful hockey career over 17 seasons. 


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